tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post3077679002031346758..comments2024-03-14T18:09:09.667-05:00Comments on Do Some Damage: The ListUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-58638016187778523342010-12-23T02:31:07.647-05:002010-12-23T02:31:07.647-05:00Good stuff. Tight writing. Believable dialogue. Yo...Good stuff. Tight writing. Believable dialogue. You did a lot with so few words.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-33807722268097730042010-12-21T13:01:20.678-05:002010-12-21T13:01:20.678-05:00Heartbreaking.Heartbreaking.Naomi Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08005429772070247806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-53885382975800442992010-12-21T11:09:15.090-05:002010-12-21T11:09:15.090-05:00"Noir equals screwed," even on Christmas..."Noir equals screwed," even on Christmas. Good, tight job.Al Tucherhttp://alberttucher.writersresidence.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-79812878730681828672010-12-21T00:36:55.399-05:002010-12-21T00:36:55.399-05:00This reminds me a bit of Dennis Lehane's lates...This reminds me a bit of Dennis Lehane's latest, which in my book is a compliment!seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-27848342521794936652010-12-20T14:39:39.401-05:002010-12-20T14:39:39.401-05:00You can bet your bottom dollar I liked the swing t...You can bet your bottom dollar I liked the swing to this one, Mr Rogers. You had me on the moving musings and then my heart smiled large with ~ "She looked over her shoulder with a smile, still believing that I could have ideas".<br /><br />Nice crime @ ChristmasTime.<br />~ Absolutely*KateKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-84616376092972163842010-12-20T12:27:15.029-05:002010-12-20T12:27:15.029-05:00Great story. Sad, with hope trying to force its w...Great story. Sad, with hope trying to force its way through. Strong characters and very emotional piece all the way through. Makes you really hope he never gets caught...Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-53435550942667581952010-12-20T10:34:13.376-05:002010-12-20T10:34:13.376-05:00Took my emotions a couple different ways. Nice job...Took my emotions a couple different ways. Nice job capturing the divorced dad / ex, and father /daughter relationshipsSean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-55725724268210040812010-12-20T10:03:07.476-05:002010-12-20T10:03:07.476-05:00What a great story!What a great story!pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-31308497962670455762010-12-20T08:49:34.922-05:002010-12-20T08:49:34.922-05:00Another super story; no wasted words, sharp dialog...Another super story; no wasted words, sharp dialogue and flowed all the way through. Thanks for that, Stephen.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.com