tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post1307450985098314176..comments2024-03-14T18:09:09.667-05:00Comments on Do Some Damage: Room at the InnUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-6774618603512149102011-01-04T16:20:14.046-05:002011-01-04T16:20:14.046-05:00Thanks for reading and commenting. K-He just had t...Thanks for reading and commenting. K-He just had to get caught- in Noir nice guys finish last. I have another street story in Patti's Sweet Dreams challenge. I have about ten more shorts in various stages of completion that I need to start sending out.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-33056721150998359212011-01-04T13:11:53.922-05:002011-01-04T13:11:53.922-05:00Great story! I just kept hoping the narrator would...Great story! I just kept hoping the narrator wouldn't get caught. The ending worked well because I so much wanted him to have a life. Could this be a longer piece?<br />--KassandraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-44113835533614547152011-01-04T06:16:17.151-05:002011-01-04T06:16:17.151-05:00A TASTY bit of hardboiled!A TASTY bit of hardboiled!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-13421144892315979692011-01-02T18:52:52.045-05:002011-01-02T18:52:52.045-05:00Oh man - the green bean casserole made the show!Oh man - the green bean casserole made the show!Kate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-7468491742130530582011-01-02T18:41:19.988-05:002011-01-02T18:41:19.988-05:00Cool noir with great imagery and a unique voice.Cool noir with great imagery and a unique voice.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-64032288506219378432011-01-02T16:56:20.521-05:002011-01-02T16:56:20.521-05:00Thanks for the comments. Maybe I was a street pers...Thanks for the comments. Maybe I was a street person in another life. Glad ya'll liked the characterizations and green bean casserole.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-72744353873086083522011-01-02T04:00:42.144-05:002011-01-02T04:00:42.144-05:00Tough, authentic and Noir. Great stuff, R.L.Tough, authentic and Noir. Great stuff, R.L.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-20146109815719266052011-01-02T01:33:29.447-05:002011-01-02T01:33:29.447-05:00Christmas on the mean streets. Nice characterizati...Christmas on the mean streets. Nice characterization and fine imagery. Enjoyed the end too!Jeffrey Culvernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-6322823396388644552011-01-01T20:41:05.889-05:002011-01-01T20:41:05.889-05:00Damn ... that old return to the scene of the crime...Damn ... that old return to the scene of the crime time ... and here I'd thought all was safe in the green bean casserole. Best dumpster descrips I've read but this liner note really brought out the smile-smirk:<br /><br />"He’s unmistakable. Ricky Cagney, wannabe big time hustler, real life small time creep." Nice tough write. ~ Absolutely*KateKate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-91110448927544822922011-01-01T19:21:16.949-05:002011-01-01T19:21:16.949-05:00Great story. I was really hoping he'd be quic...Great story. I was really hoping he'd be quick about his double-check, but just when you think the cops will be slow... Nuts. Love the suspense and the character.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7119990365479009764.post-49431688714286545132011-01-01T17:24:41.092-05:002011-01-01T17:24:41.092-05:00Great stuff, R.L. The voice rings true. Do you hav...Great stuff, R.L. The voice rings true. Do you have a secret identity as a street person?Evan Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620731784654779358noreply@blogger.com